I have a story I've been writing on and off for about 14 years (yes, years) and I've finally decided what I want to do with it. The goal is to turn it into an animated series, because it was getting into Tolkien-levels of description. Things have changed since day one, but I'd like to float basic plot ideas by a few people to see what works and what doesn't or what needs to be elaborated on more.

If anyone is interested in giving some honest, no-holds-barred feedback on my life's work, please feel free to message me, and I'll send you a single-page breakdown.

Thanks very much!